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| Part 1 - Frying Pan |
Summary (Chapter 1-11 [P. 3-103])
Susan Juby’s
novel, Getting the Girl, follows the adventures of 9th grade student, Sherman
Mack, in his investigation of ‘defiling’ at Harewood Tech High School. Sherman
is described as a nerdy, unsociable person, but is shown to be generally caring
toward females, especially of his 10th grade friend, Dini Trioli. When rumors
arise that Dini’s boyfriend, Lester Broadside, is responsible for the ‘Defiling’
and subsequent social ruination of former Harewood school girls, Sherman
decides to investigate the matter. To aid him, Sherman draws support from his
friends, Rick and Vanessa, and from his mentor, Fred, who lend him advice and assistance
in his investigation.
Knowing the
dark nature of the matter, Sherman consults the school’s drug dealer, Ed the Head, who
refers him to one of the former Defiled girls, Farrah Fawcett. Upon meeting
Farrah, Sherman grew suspicious when Farrah revealed she used to date Lester,
and feels pity for her, as she was once a vivacious girl before becoming
‘D-listed’. Resolved to take action, Sherman puts forth an operation to improve
his standing with Dini, but results in failure and distances him further away
from her instead. The next day, a picture of Sherman meeting with Farrah
–marked in the corner with a D- mysteriously appears in Sherman’s class,
leaving him and his friends shaken, and disheartens them from continuing the
case, considering the photo a warning.
Analytical Paragraph
In Susan
Juby’s novel, Getting the Girl, the story is written from Sherman’s
perspective, which is characterized by short thoughts and frequent output of
his opinions. This style is suitable as a voice of a ninth grader and helps the
reader connect a greater understanding of his character and the nature of his
actions. Sherman is shown to be very interested in cooking and sometimes uses
food as a medium of expression; such as ‘Vanessa made a little lemon-tasting
face’ (Juby 40), when he was discussing about defiling with Vanessa. This brings
the reader to see more through Sherman’s perspective than if he had simply said
‘Vanessa made a sour face’. Altogether, Susan Juby spices up the plot by adding
a characteristic twist that resonates with the readers.
Interactive Response
In this
interactive entry, I will go more in detail on the background information of
Sherman’s high school. Harewood Tech hosts the usual school system of social
popularity, such as: jocks, Trophy Wives (will explain in a future entry), and
scholars; however, it contains another other class of people called the Defiled. Seemingly
only happening to females, it is when a female’s picture, with a D written over
it, is posted in all student bathrooms. From that point, bad rumors are spread
about that girl and everybody except, the teachers, ignore her, almost in an
erasing manner. I find this as fitting case that Sherman would have a motive to
solve, given his considerateness toward all girls. Even with this portion of
the plot explained, there remains a large amount of peripheral information in
the story that’s uncovered. To fully grasp what Susan Juby has created, there
is no substitute for reading the novel itself.

First and foremost, I think that the summary could have been a little shorter. The analytical paragraph is probably the most well-written paragraph out of the three. Although it is concise, it does go in-depth into the character Sherman. The interactive paragraph (which I though is supposed to be a personal response) is also very concise. "; but" is very uncommon, I would recommend fixing that, "that's" - contraction.
ReplyDeleteOverall, good attempts on first entry :)